高考备考正在进行中,新东方高考频道小编为大家搜集了历年高考英语满分作文,高考英语精选范文供大家参考,希望能帮助各位学子在高考英语写作中积累足够经验,在此预祝各位高考学子鱼跃龙门。(也可关注,新东方高考微信公众考:xdfgaokao了解最新高考动态!)历年高考英语满分作文(山东卷) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 字数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:“假期安排”部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话 【范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (问候) Youasked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation。(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply withoutdelay。(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply youremail as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final examat that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but tocompletely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make thesame choice。(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way, I have a busy schedule for mysummer vacation。(主题句) First and foremost, I would do apart time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved。(拓展句1)
Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course inthe New Oriental School。(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as avolunteer for the school as a teaching assistant。(拓展句3)
These are my plan for the summer vacation.What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply。(以合理的客套话结尾)