② Salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge damsto reach their destination. 二、省字号()的滥用 ① the governments plan ② the plan of the government 三、代词之间的性、数、格不一致 ① Everyone has their homework. ② Everyone has his (or her) homework. 四、主句与从句的顺序不当 ① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the NASDAQ valuedropped by over two thirds. ② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionairesfound out the party was over. 五、双重否定 ① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. ② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. 六、修饰语、插入语的位置不当 ① The forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak. ② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak. 七、意义含糊的先行词 ① The band members collected his and her uniforms. ② The band members collected their uniforms. 八、介词和冠词的滥用 ① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms. ② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms. 九、句子缺少成分 ① When aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses. ② When aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses. 十、忘记断句 ① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print apacket at the same time. ② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print apacket at the same time. 编辑推荐
