雅思口语考官范文分析,顾名思义就是对雅思口语考官所撰写的范文进行分析,下面以parks公园话题为例,为大家详细分析,一起来看看具体内容吧!
首先,以喜好类话题为例“Do you like going to parks and/or public gardens?”
“你喜欢去公园或者花园吗?”这样的问题一般都会有两种答案,If yes:
Yeah, on the whole I do, as long as the weather’s nice of course! You know, I think they’re nice places to go to get some fresh air and enjoy the natural environment. And I always tend to feel a bit less stressed out when I’m in a garden or park.
来看看其中的词汇和短语:
As long as the weather’s nice of course – 当然只要天气好的话
Stressed out -极度焦虑不安的;心力交瘁的 If someone is stressed out, they are tense and anxious because of difficulties in their lives.
再来看看衔接词:
交流标记词:You know,……;And……
句式运用有简单句,省略句,宾语从句,时间状语从句
从上述内容可以看到,首先对问题进行了肯定回答,后面则是具体陈述。再来看,词汇和语法的运用都避免了单一成分,而且体现出了灵活多样。而从衔接词来看,不仅能够体现连贯性还能够让人觉得是在和某人交流而非自己陈述或者背诵。而词汇方面也体现了用词的地道性。所以综合来看,能够达到7.5分及以上的水平。
然后,我们来看一下否定回答If no: No I don’t, because I kind of think there’s not really that much to do in parks. I mean, most of the ones near to where I live have nothing! You know, all you can really do is just wander around, and after you’ve been to them so many times, they kind of get a bit boring, if you know what I mean!
回答内容:进行否定回答,进一步解释;
衔接词:
I mean……,You know……,交流标记词,既链接上下文又能够给人以交流的感觉;
词汇运用:虽然没有难词,但是不局限于简单词,符合口语表达的要求。
句式表达:宾语从句,地点状语从句,条件状语从句……
而且还有地道句式:there’s not really that much to do– 没什么可做的
所以综合来看,既符合雅思口语评分标准的要求,又能够体现地道的特点。因此,此答案的得分也应该在7.5及以上。
但是需要特别注意的是不管是肯定回答还是否定回答,都只是考虑词汇,句式,连贯度等能够从文本中看的出来的东西,而发音和连贯度是无法体现的,因此这里的得分会有2.5分左右的误差。当然如果你的发音也很好,在考场上发挥正常,那么就不于担心。