问题补充：
假设你将代表初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点如下：
回顾
校园很美丽；每学期有丰富多彩的活动，例如，去年地震过后，学校组织了捐款活动；老师教学生动有趣；三年来学到很多，进步大。
感谢
老师的培养，父母的支持，同学的帮助
祝愿
我希望……
1. 发言稿须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 最后一个要点适当发挥1~2句；
3. 词数80个左右，发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone! It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. For example, our school made a donation after the earthquake last year. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help. I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here.
答案：
(答案→)Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. For example, our school made a donation after the earthquake last year. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help. I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here.
解析：
这篇书面表达是根据要点来写的，所以主要把要点都表达出来，注意单词拼写正确，语法没有问题，适当使用恰当的句型。前面的回顾和感谢主要是结合要点进行阐述，最后的祝愿是学生根据自己的情况进行发挥，表现学生发散思维的能力。写作时注意不同时态的运用，例如回顾阶段，主要是过去时，表示感谢时主要用一般现在时，祝愿当然用一般将来时了。在范文中，一些词组和句型的运用值得学习，made a donation “捐赠”make their lessons lively and interesting“使课堂生动有趣” made great progress“取得很大的进步” We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help.这句话用的是排比的关系。
假设你将代表初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言 请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点如下：回顾校园很美丽；每学期有丰富多彩的活动 例如 去年地震过后 学校组织了捐款活动；老师教学生动有趣；三年来学
